Great job Rich! Very smooth and slow! I think you can add "picking dynamics" 2nd or 3rd pattern, you can start playing softer and when you reach at 12th fret...almost no sound from your guitar. So as much as you can go softer!
I still practice chromatic scale everyday. This is my source of foundation. In order to play fast funk or jazzy soloing... This is the one that can help your performance skills.
Thanks so much for sharing this!
Tomo